/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

This is a coord that I was working on as my first attempt at old school. I've been into lolita for probably two years and only just started buying this past December.
I know that my shoes are wrong, this was for a casual dinner meet, and I didn't get to buy my shoes yet. I needed help or time to buy the perfect shoes.
Bangs aren't cut because I literally just got the wig from a group order and I got excited and slapped it on.
I also feel like I am shit at cutting bangs. Will add another picture for proof.

I think that I might look like a sack because of my petticoat being pulled too high, but my dress' waist was too low for the petti not to be at least half exposed. I only have a bell shaped petticoat because I thought that "well that's the silhouette, I have it down!" And it looked good with my other dresses. I know I need to invest in an A-line. I just really seriously need help.
Was going to go to closet of frills but I didn't want too much ass-patting.
first time posting but long time lurker.. Please be a little bit gentle