/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>8804319
They're a cute style and I really like the flowers but like others have mentioned they're quite busy. It's easy to lose detail depending on the size you're working with so some things might get lost or blend. First thing I noticed was your lines are quite jagged at certain areas. Not sure if you've been erasing them or your pen is doing something but the lines for example at the birds wings are strange. Since the eyes are so bright on the left I suggest you add more detail or darken the base colour a bit so the details you already have stand out more. They give off a flat appearance the way they are now whereas the one's on the right have a bit more life in them.
I played around with some palettes and added some depth to the left's eyes. I tried lots of different colours for the frame but looking at the green now I'm not so sure if it's good or not. There's quite a few colours so it's hard to find one that matches but doesn't clash. Right charm is good but maybe a tad bit washed out.