/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

Hello everybody!

I don't know where else to post this, so please forgive me if I'm in the wrong thread.

I'm new to lolita and because I had some spare time, I tried to put together a coord for the first time.

I like to keep it simple, but somehow something seems wrong; what could it be?
I think it needs some spice, can you help me out and share general tips for coords more simple?

Thanks a lot, its really fun!