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I think there's a fair bit of room for improvement here; unfortunately some of that may involve remaking things.

- Cape should go to your knees; though the length can vary in the anime, I don't believe it was ever that long.
- Tighten up the cuffs on your gloves; they look a bit oversized. Try using interfacing on the inside of the cuffs to make them more crisp.
- Try to form the white blouse section to your body a bit better; it's kind of frumpy on you right now.
- Skirt needs to be a fair bit shorter, with crisper pleats. The white trim should be narrower.
- One of your thigh-high belts is missing, and the other is falling down. Consider adding elastic strips or using sock tape to keep them up.
- One of your armbands is missing.
- As mentioned previously, the wig could be improved; try a more subtle blue, or a grey/blue blend.

In spite of my criticism, you were pretty brave to go for this much of a challenge as a beginner, so props for that. Every costume is a learning experience.

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