/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>9044923
>>9044947

I thought the eyes were eyebrows too.

I think you need to think about how you're going to make it successful and readable to other people. If you were trying to be abstract, it hasn't worked. We don't really know what it is.


-The colour of the frame is too dark/murky

-The nose is the same colour of the background, don't do that. It's hard to see. Make it a colour that stands out, along with the things you want people to see.

-Look at a cats face for stracture, even if it's not going to be 3d, there's still basic proportions. The eyes wouldn't be that far sway from the nose and neither would the whiskers. They don't look like eyes, even closed. They're too far up and look like eyebrows.

As it is now, it just looks like a random back with broken off pieces stuck to it. You need to make the bits neater and vary in thickness. (cats whiskers are much thinner than its eyes)

Work on:

1: Making it look like a cat face

2: Successful colour scheme

3: Cleaner