/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>9457808
Thanks for the crit anon! Im glad the proportions and body language are looking good. Ive really struggled trying to learn chibis so I'm glad Im getting somewhere.

>>9457823
Awesome crit! Thank you so so much. I think Im getting at what you are saying with the sunken in head. Its too far back in the space and wouldnt be where a head should be? It looks like very small changes you made to the alien girls heads but gosh darn they look way better. Thank you so so much for the advice. I'll try to fix some of the inconsistencies. I do know thats a weak point of mine. Again thank you so much! Im glad I can get this advice on the sketches before I work hard on coloring and lining.

>>9457830
Thank you! I will try playing around with the feet a bit more. I love the stumpy fat limbed/even sometime cankle-y look some people draw haha so I tried to work with that. But I agree that it could look better with a more defined shape instead of a U shaped nub. Its not something I had thought about so thank you thank you < 3 I really appreciate everyones help!

>>9457989
Thank you for the advice! I did consciously decide to go with a 4 finger which I know is more common for western art. My train of thought was that chibis always go for simplification so 4 fingers seemed like a way to further simplify the hands. I'll try messing around with 5 fingers though and see what looks better


Again thank you so so much everyone for the helpful advice. I want to learn from my mistakes so I can correct these and keep those thoughts in mind when I am working on future art work as well.

I got my Antique Beast order in the other day, this was from the order that was open in early September.
>just letting others know if they're waiting for their orders as well

>mfw this thread is full of fat asian qts pictures

Also quite surprised for the support since usually even seagulls hate the fattychans.

Anybody keep a file of their wardrobe for this fashion? Like girls do for lolita.
I keep mine in a private folder on facebook and I find it really handy. I'd love to see people posts theirs!