/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

I hope this is okay to post here even though it's not technically a bag or even a finished layout. But could I get some concrit?

The blank spots on the right side are planned to mirror the left side, I just need to order the rest of it. I also plan to go with the ribbon Wego tote in black for my base bag. The merch that isn't placed on the far left is just leftover I have that I didn't plan on using, where the stuff on the far right I plan to have on the outside of the bag somewhere. I'd like to use the GraffArt button for a rosette.

Sorry for the big wall of text, and thank you in advance!