/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>8515738
TBH I find the composition boring as heck. The text completely overwhelms the art - it being the main feature would be ok if it were hand-drawn and not just a stock font.

I did a (quick and dirty) mockup that I personally would find more exciting/enticing. I would get rid of the purple entirely around the figures except for the smoke from the necks (mostly there because of the soft edge on the necks and to add interest) and the shadow. If you don't want to personally write out the words, at least edit them to make them more graffiti-like/irregular. IMO the art would benefit from bolder black lines and more line weight variation as well.