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What's the best way for writing product description?
I wrote my description in bullet points so it's easy to read, yet most customers just keep scrolling down (watched in recordings) without stopping to read.

How do I make people read description?

>> No.23911092
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>yet most customers just keep scrolling down (watched in recordings)

>> No.23911117
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>customers just keep scrolling down (watched in recordings) without stopping to read.

>> No.23911146

HEY YOU STUPID FAGGOT! (insert description here)

BET YOU WONT READ THIS YOU QUEER: (more info)

DUMBFUCK ALERT! (more information)

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>(watched in recordings)

>> No.23911345

>>23911146
Funny, but help me out fren

>> No.23911415

>>23911345
if you want retards to read your stuff, then you need to know the fundamentals of copywriting
there are ways to structure sentences and to use certain words that get people to read stuff more often

if its dry or sounds gay then normie brain autopilots past it
if you can make it appeal to your audience they will latch onto it more often

>> No.23911448

You need a really attractive picture of your product. And a simple tagline, not too much.

>> No.23911449

>>23911415
I got this written from a copywriter who's majoring in zoology from University of Glasgow

>> No.23911506

>>23911449
not all copywriters are made equal

>> No.23911980

>>23911092
>>23911117
>>23911157
really hope OP is larping