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20381265 No.20381265 [Reply] [Original]

Hey guys, so I got my store up and running now. I made it on my phone so I know it's not the best but still.

I was just wondering if you all could give me some honest criticism and feedback for the product pages. Ideally the blue light pen and the magnetic eyelashes.
Those will be the two products I first focus on and I could really use some honest feedback regarding it since I'm in Laos and no family or friends speak English.

How is the product description, what could I do to make it more appealling to buy etc. Be as brutally honest as you can please since it all helps.

Site is as follows
www.ishtarbeauty.store

Thanks heaps of anyone replies

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20381312

Will post Radom pics I guess while wait

>> No.20381372

>>20381265
English looks fine to me buddy.

I'm English :)

>> No.20381397

Remove all the broken english reviews.

>> No.20381401

>>20381265
> Ishtar
What kind of Babylonian cult are you running

>> No.20381499

>>20381397
But the customers are international. Wouldn't it make sense the reviews are broken? The reviews themselves are real from the production website. >>20381401
I noticed a trend with companies succeeding if they use certain imagery or names

>> No.20381529

>>20381372
I appreciate that. But aside from the English how are the sales funnel, is there an urge to buy once you've seen the page? What is an instant turn off?

>> No.20381558

>>20381499
You won't get any amerifats then. Just telling you that most women will see the broken english and foreigner names and be discouraged from buying your shit beauty products.

source: have dated many prudes that wanted to be models.

>> No.20381734

>>20381558
I ran some ads yesterday and yes it was mainky Brazilian visitors.
Ok I will find a way to write some reviews from America.

>> No.20381785

>>20381558
Also not shit. Same factory as neutrogena. Just the extras they made for them get sold off in bulk for cheap

Neutrogena sell sane pen for 234 dollar and only difference is box and label