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[Anonymous No.648951]

Almost complete beginner here, this is my first finished render, how is my composition and lighting?

[Anonymous No.648955]

marge

[Anonymous No.648957]

pink. really really pink

[Anonymous No.648959]

well here's a better question.

does it look good to you?

[Anonymous No.648982]

marge

[Anonymous No.648984]

d'uh

[Anonymous No.648986]

>filename
you asshole

[Anonymous No.649266]

where egg marger

[Anonymous No.649267]

shit's all fucked dude

[Anonymous No.649300]

>>648951
>he accidentally put pink on the cup

what am amateur lol

[Anonymous No.651297]

Exposure (especially looking at the table) is a bit too high. Shading and IOR on the donut is hella flat. Use white sprinkles for contrast. Table is pretty weird looking and theres not much spatial reference (no objects in background / obvious walls).

[Anonymous No.651316]

Real talk, if you struggle a little bit with the modelling portion should you just fucking give up? I was told this is the easiest shit amongst the easiest shit, and I'm a little nervous because modelling the mug took a little longer than I feel like it should've. I have no idea what to expect from myself.

[Anonymous No.651615]

im with you OP, 2 days in, just finished the beginner playlist
im about to begin the modeling playlist

[Anonymous No.651617]

i made this just after the donut for fun in like 20mn
maybe 30 for fine tuning the lightning etc for the render

[Anonymous No.651620]

i think something is wrong the handle of your mug
the rest seems fine... is the interior of your donut toping ok like the exterior?

i had to completely remake my donut because i fucked the icing effect the first time
i also cheated for the plate and waited for him to show his solution before doing mine, i was doodling instead of doing the homework

also just before rendering the scene after the end of the playlist i realised i had duplicate of my mug (x2 mugs at the same place fucking it appearance) and x2 table plane, idk why

i advice getting rid of un-used materials and cleaning everything once you're done like layers etc

i had to watch some of the vids two times and do the donut twice so don't worry

also another tip could be to make a clean blender folder with sub folders like
>renders
>textures
>shorcut pdf

etc

oh yeah and doing capture if you're tired and need a ref without going back in the video like pic related

keep posting your progress

[Anonymous No.651686]

i can't stand this shit. stop making these plastic doughnuts.

do something original and cool

[Anonymous No.651692]

>>651686
i just made this
also halfway through the anvil

[Anonymous No.651693]

why so many donuts and no anvils?
do people just give up after the donut?

[Anonymous No.651695]

>>651686
come on, when you never touched a 3d software before, you need to learn
kind of pointless to doodle aimlessly just to get stuck on something because you know only half of the software possibilities

[Anonymous No.652767]

>>651693
The anvil is significantly less fun

[Anonymous No.652783]

>>648951
>cup on left side
what kind of mongrel places his drink in such an inconvenient spot?
unrealistic, 0/10

[Anonymous No.652784]

>>651693
>anvil
What are you 200 years old?

[Anonymous No.652982]

>>651693

I'd really like to see someone push the upper boundaries of blender and place a donut on an anvil.

[Anonymous No.652990]

>>652982
It's been done. Lurk moar. Now, an anvil on top of a donut... that would surely push the boundaries of Blender art.

[Anonymous No.652997]

>>652783
>the left side
?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oDiQQtULl4g

[Anonymous No.653023]

>>651693
i got distracted....

[Anonymous No.653025]

>>653023
aaaaaaaaand i got distracted again