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642398 No.642398 [Reply] [Original]

pls rate.

It's my first serious animation.

>> No.642409 [DELETED] 

>>642398
Do lowpoly porn

>> No.642411

>>642409
would low poly vulva have just 4 verts? like a diamond shape pussy with with 4 tries going inside with one vert in the middle with hand painted uterus? That could perfectly accommodate a square shafted penis ending with a square pyramid for the head.

>> No.642457

>>642411
>boolean the pussy
>"your dick fits perfectly in my pussy!"
>"it's as if god made this hole for my dick!"

>> No.642460

>>642457
it's like puzzle pieces.

>> No.642468

>>642398
Why post your first? Why not wait and post your best?

>> No.642527

Unnatural Hipmovement, weak pose + head snap
Short cycles:
Keep them simple, slow breathing, small weightshifts, no major actions or turns etc. If a cycle is short every repeated "big" action is swiftly noticed and the cycle is recognized as such.

>> No.642545

I really like the model style but I would say this as well
>>642527

>> No.642555

Well the feedback on animation you got here >>642527

so I just want to say that much low poly should use emissive shadeless materials

>> No.642643

>>642468
how the hell will he know what to improve if he doesnt receive any constructive criticism from people

>> No.642644

the shadow is high quality for such a lowpoly character

>> No.642892

>>642643
At the stage he's at his eyes should be plenty enough

>> No.642911

>>642398
Methinks you should make the cranium larger. Enlarge it.

>> No.642928

looks pretty slick
you should make longer animations

>> No.642945

Not bad for a start

If its maya, try to find a thing called "hypergraph", its your best friend. Check your animation curves and try to get smoother movements, also try to make a smooth animation cycle, so the viewer cant see when it starts and when it stops. The feet are glued to the ground and the legs get longer and shorter, try to get some inverse kinematic thing going at the legs there

Overall it helps a lot if you act out a movement a couple of times while you animate it, youll find out some tiny details which make a huge difference

Now make another animation, ganbare!

>> No.643371

>>642398
I presume it is an idle animation, moves too much i think, try to moderate it, make it more gentle

>> No.643514

It's shit. I don't even model or animate. You really fucked up the hip movement, looks like she's just sticking her ass out.

>> No.643516

Ayyy jamundi

>> No.643647

>>642398
Make sure to avoid any unnatural patterns like the plague. Look at her hands and the gun, there's no rotation and they seem to move along a rail.

Also, think about animating the center of mass first. If you want her to shift her weight from leg to leg, the COM should move appropriately - but in your case, it barely moves at all, let alone from side to side.

>> No.644340

I can tell you watch too much hentai by how the hips cock back and it's really annoying to look at.

>> No.644400

>>644340
How would you know this?

>> No.644494

>>644400
It seems more like a dance rather than a idle standing animation, maybe it's just perspective, either way the hips have an irregular amount of movement compared to the rest of the body.

>> No.644793

>>642398
Learn about animation curves.

>> No.644868

>>642398
>>642398
>>642398
>>642398
>>642398
what her low poly>>642398

cunt look like

>> No.645034

>>644868
like your face

>> No.645035

>>642398
It's not bad. It looks alive for one unlike most CG.

There's a nice book worth owning called 'Animator's Survival Kit'. It's the only book you really need in your life.

>> No.647610

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>> No.647667

>>647610
pretty much this