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First Try using grass essentials and pro-lightning from blenderguru. hope you like it

>> No.495690

The scale thing doesn't work for me.

My brain tries to make it into a potted bonzai tree with poorly modeled mold on the dirt.

I thought the grass looked pretty good, but only after I forced myself to see it as grass.

>> No.495691
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>>495687
The render is alright, but the scale and DOF are really weird. Keep it up dud/3/

>> No.495693

>>495687

Your DOF is atrocious and ruins whatever potential it had.

>> No.495694

looks good but that dof is fucking bad, my suggestion is to learn up photography and integrate that shit into your renderings.

>> No.495696

>>495687

Your scale makes no fucking sense. The bowl pattern implies small, the grass, planks and tree itself and dof implies small.

>> No.495698

>>495696
maybe its a bonsai tree?

>> No.495705

>>495698

Look at the scale of the planks below the bowl.

>> No.495707

>>495696
That's the point. It is stylized proportions.

>> No.495715
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>>495707
>The image fails by design

>> No.495717

>>495687
what is supposed to be in focus here?

>> No.495718

>>495687

Vaporwave cover/10

>> No.495719

>>495718
>Vaporwave
Had to google it, did not disappoint

>> No.495721

>>495696
>implying scale matters
it probably abstract shit.

>> No.495722

>>495719


>searched Vaporwave as well
>went too google
>Feels like Daft Punk and Microsoft Sam took my music virginity.

>> No.495724

>>495707

Stylized proportions are CONSISTENT. Yours are all over the fucking place.

It's like someone who is bad at drawing perspective calling it stylized. Everyone can see straight through it.

>> No.495733

>>495724
Tell that to Picasso because you are obviously a better artist!

>> No.495745
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495745

thanks for the comments. here's a new version

>> No.495746

>>495745
the only thing looking nice is the grass which you didn't do

>> No.495759

>>495733

>implying Picasso's work has inconsistent rules

Are you retarded?

You wouldn't understand cubism if you took a 3 year BA(Hons) and actually paid attention instead of masturbating into your own mouth for a year and dropping out because your parents don't love you enough to fund your string of broken laptops even though they paid for your tuition and living costs.


>>495745
The clouds look stretched, the planks still don't make any sense scale wise and now they're blurry.

It's a generated tree and grass I suppose. Congrats.

>> No.495769

>>495724
Shut up! It is MY art. If you don't like then don't look.

>> No.495770

>>495769
u r a cuck :^|

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>> No.495825

>>495822

That's how you do it.

>> No.495827

>>495825
thanks

>> No.495837

>>495822
looks like something straight out of Edward Scissorhands

>> No.495839

>>495837
why?

>> No.495900

>>495822
I like this but I liked the style >>495745 had going

>> No.495910

>>495759
>Are you retarded?
You are just a bad tempered little kid, with no understanding of art.

>>495687
I personally like the planks the original size.
The only thing I would change is the texture on the bowl, wood grain doesn't work that way and in any event it would enhance the effect if you 'weathered' it a little a small crack or two and a few chips on the rim.

A couple of small weeds or daisy's or something in the grass might be worth considering too!

>> No.495930

>>495687
Looks more like a carpet
Still good though

>> No.495950
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495950

OP here, a litle update on the render above, a night edition with som lamps and shit.

>> No.495951

>>495950
some lamps and a few fireflies

>> No.495952

>>495950
use a decent night backplate you dicknipple

>> No.495953

>>495950
Up the samples and play with the clamp values, the noise and the fireflies are terrible.

>> No.495954

>>495952
assboob, its twilight.

>> No.495955

>>495953
i know

>> No.495957

>>495954
it will look better at night you cumkicker

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>>495957

>> No.495962

>>495959
DO IT YOU TIMDICK CUCK >:O

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>>495962

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>>495963

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>>495965

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>>495967
thx :^3

>> No.495973

>>495972
but you have to wait, it's still rendering

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>>495973
k

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little sneak peek

>> No.495976
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>>495975
NOT NIGHT ENOUGH >:O

>> No.495978

>>495976
but that's the night you get

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>>495978
k

>> No.495980
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495980

here it is, night edition

>> No.495981

>>495980
Better :^)

>> No.495993

>>495980
How do you make flowers like this?

>> No.495994

>>495993
Im using grass essentials from blenderguru

>> No.496001

>>495980
Add moon+ stars+ fireflies and give a foggy kind-of-feeling, that's your homework mister.

>> No.496008

>>496001
i will try

>> No.496011

>>496008
you can do it, you're good

>> No.496013

>>496011
well, i kind of lost the file, but dont worry im currently working on a diferent project and i will implement my homework. it's rendering a preview and i will upload it here

>> No.496014
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>> No.496015

>>496014
love it :^) much more nightish

>> No.496018
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496018

new version

>> No.496020

>>496018

Too far.

>> No.496022

>>496020
just wait, im getting places

>> No.496028
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496028

need to clean the fireflies, but as i said, getting placeses

>> No.496029

>>496028
looks awful

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>>496029

>> No.496052

>>496049
your scale is way off again.

>> No.496054

>>496052
I guess i can ser that, the lamps are way to big, right?

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>>496054
> the lamps are way to big, right?

>> No.496065

>>496054
every single part of the ground needs to be scaled down. textures and all.