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I'm just an amature.

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>>426839
I'm just an armature.

>> No.426849

How the fuck did you do those plants man they look great!

>> No.426850

>>426849
they are readymade idiot

>> No.426855

>>426850
Readymade??? Is that supposed to tell me something?

Btw im no idiot, im closer to what you call: Newbie

>> No.426863

>>426849
Ivy Grower plugin.

>> No.426868

>>426855
yeah dude readymade like those duchamp sculptures

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I'm just an armchair.

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>>426868
B-B-But muh art, I made it.

>> No.426882

>>426839
>>426840
>>426842
Sir, there's a fire in your TV cabinet.

>> No.426949

I hang translucent cellophane photos of nature landscapes made from low quality jpegs outside my window too.

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Floor lamp right next to a wall lamp

>> No.427014

>>426839
backdrop is grainy

>> No.427018

>>426878
i've seen this in a doodle or die chain

>> No.427019

Too much empty space on the wall in the back.
Why are the wall lamps so low? Lift them higher to partially solve previous issue.

Pespective on outside view is completely fucked and light levels don't match the curtains.

That fire makes no sense, ti would just burn/soot up the surface above it, you need a chimney.

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Keep practicing/10

>> No.427081

>>427037
how can it look too cold if there is bonfire in the cupboard?

Sooner or later whole house will be on fire.

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>> No.427145

>>426992
some people actually like to read

>> No.427151

>>427145
"Read?" What's that?

>> No.427152 [DELETED] 

you have to check out this video
http://www.youramonkey.com/?m=IDZZN3yRZE13kFC7T

>> No.427165

>>427037
>>427081

hes right though lol wtf is that fire doing there

>> No.427172

>>427165
I've seen digital screens with fires on them in odd places in peoples houses. I'm not sure what the purpose is though.

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>> No.427248

>>427145
So then you would use the wall lamp right there. and get rid of the floor lamp. Or vise versa.

Dumbass.

>> No.427255

>>427248
Yeah I'm holding up my book to a wall to read. That's the smart way to do it right?

>> No.427795

>>427037
There.. Are.. Four.. Lights!

>> No.427853

>>427795
hes pointing out that there are 3 lights unnecessarily clustered together, you fucking retard.

>> No.427855

>>427853
>you fucking retard.

Nigger please.

>> No.427907

>>427255
So then get rid of that extra wall lamp.

>> No.428048

>>427853

Woooooosh.

>> No.428080

>>426842
this composition is terrible

actually the composition is terrible in all of your renders. please read up on composition

>> No.428132

>>427907
You're saying that you would completely remove a wall fixture just because you have a lamp on a desk near it? Why not just turn off the fucking light? Or maybe not care so much that you have two lights in the vicinity? Jesus Christ anon.

>> No.428133

>>426839
One thing I don't like about scenes like this is how pristine they look. It doesn't look like a human being has ever set foot in the room, the scene would be massively improved by adding some indication of prior use. wrinkles and depressions in the couch, maybe a stain on the floor, stuff like that. It looks like the tiles are just a solid color with a normal map. Add some mortar/whatever its called in between the tiles and put some scratches or smears into the normal and spec maps to add to the realism of the scene.

Also, I don't know why you put a fire in the cabinet but get rid of it, that makes no sense. It's a nice looking fire though, you could always replace that part of the wall with a fireplace with the TV above it. Another anon said that the scene looks too cold, which could be easily fixed by just increasing the intensity of the lights from the fire, having it bounce around the room and illuminate other objects would add a lot of warmth and overall comfiness to the scene.

Last thing is the light fixture placement, it seems like an odd setup. Get some reference images of actual houses that are similarly styled and pattern your placement of lights off that, the current setup doesn't make much sense.

Overall though I think the lighting is very well done, if a little bit mundane. The drapes are awesome too

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