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Rate my 1st model?

I've used Autodesk inventor for a while, and sculpted irl before.
Pretty much only know the basics, changing pen, add and sub, pen intensity and stuff like that.

>Beginners General

>> No.463092
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A low quality gif:
http://i.gyazo.com/ae5471ddf80b8d77e3b621ed75927667.gif

>> No.463099

Proportions: good
Anatomy: okay but some things are just wrong
Mesh control: hideous. inconsistent level of detail. Blob monster syndrome. The product doesn't seem finished. You need to refine the lower level before adding detail.

Practice more and so you can improve

>> No.463105

>>463099
Thanks for the advice. Could you specify on what parts of the anatomy need work on?

>> No.463106

Nice work :)

>> No.463107

>>463106
thank you!

>> No.463109

>>463105
Not the other guy but I think the eyes might be too far apart, nose too bi at the top, ears too small, no neck.

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>>463109
I'd agree with you there. Wasn't aiming for it to be aesthetically perfect though, as a lot of people in the world aren't, which is where a lot of games and such come apart imo, or fall into the uncanny valley.
I should tone those things down though.