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>>648391
im not gonna a specific advice for this video, alone. but more generally about you and where you can improve.

i like how you pick your camera angels but that's about it. i think that you should improve on everything, and im mostly talking about modeling in general,lightning,texturing etc.
even without ray-trace you can still produce great looking images/videos.
i suggest you learn everything about how lightning works in 3D, for starters. if scenery is your thing then lightning is going to be very important. secondly is modeling and materials.
there are plenty of tutorials online. even free ones.. you don't have to tear down your scene, just make the necessary improvements.

i think pic related is a good level you can reach in within a few months to a year. go get em tiger