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>>360612
I'm not trying to insult you, dude but with your current work it simply looks like you don't have a style and are going with it rather than you having a style and choosing it to look this way. The main reasons can be summed up with your guy looks uncanny without a point of reference.

For all we know this really is how he's supposed to look but if you really want anyone to believe that then you'll have to be able to show that this character is not a riddled mistakes.

This character of yours looks old, long-faced and generally kinda ugly(which ISN'T a bad thing!) which makes him hard to look at but if you can make a character with much more normal proportions then it can ease your viewers perception.

On the side is a very minor example of what I mean with his eyes more centred on his head but if you could make a younger character(25-35 or so) then that'd be even better.

Not all criticism is correct criticism but if that's all you're getting then maybe there is a problem.

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