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>>640208
yeah, folkin is awesome ))
now that you posted your model i'll give some cc, what i'd improve.. (i'm no expert tho )))
i don't think bubblyness is the main problem. you should push spine in, especially where i highlited in picture(push with big move brush. also pull out love handles a bit..
elbows are too pinched, pull out its sides. also, it's like she has no muscles in lower arms, they are too flattened.
clavicle bones are two separate bones, there is a gap between them
hands are also tooo bony, especially thumb.
whole character is shaped very well, but you are pinching elbows too much, try smoothing places like that..

overall character is really beliavable! very few pulls that off.
>>640210
tnx!! ) it is cyberpunk, but not 77 )) I mean i'm not making fanart of the game (I really love the game tho.. I'm sure these guys will pull it off 100%)


>>640192
yeah, i'm going to rado the jacket, I'm even thinking to scrap it and do new one..
but first I'll make robot arm. then make jacket, with reaped sleeve at one shoulder
I'm also making bike for her..