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Not that anon. I don't think there's anything wrong with stylization, but I do think something is uh, "off", with your laugh lines. I am no expert in human faces or anything but a quick google search shows that they don't veer off so much to the sides or are so pronounced towards the end of the cheeks and start of the chin. They're also pretty damn big for laugh lines, even for something stylized it looks a little silly considering he's meant to be (I imagine) human.

The hair has also started to look kinda weird. You're in a sort of in-between step where it's not just a bunch of planes with textured hair, and it's also not the big-clumped Overwatch-style cartoony hair. As a result, to me, it looks like a bunch of soba noodles or parasitic worms forming up the strands.

The rest looks great, masterful use of damien standard or crease brushes, whatever you did decide to use there. The little overcoat medal also looks fantastic.

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