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>>641626
>>641546
sorry anon for being this late ))
I'm in a middle deadline/crunch time.. that's why I have not replied, I have not even looked here.
>>641567
I'm the person who "redlined" not him.

anyway, here are my cc-s
first. spine goes the wrong way(where it ends). and place where spine meets butt is bulged out on your model. it should be a flat plane(not literally). just like on examples.
that is the main error in your model.

second thing, smooth out these two abs, there is no way girl like that would have promminent abs.
elbows still stick out tooo mmuch. (again look at examples.

I highlighted with turqoise overall places where you should just smooth out things, they are generated because of incorrect workflow(from what I understand)... because you added skin phores and wrinkles too soon and now you can not use smooth brush on higher subdivs, but smooth brush is not made for low subdivs, it destroys the mesh.
just smooth out skin details, and use smooth brush to clean out these small imperfections,

you shuld add skin details and things like that on literall end phase.