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>>641534
>Eh.. do something about that expression man, make him slightly more sinister or evil. the detailing and firms are very good. But your daemon is lacking in design. I'm not saying to make him into caricature or go cartoony way BTW,

meh, i still dont like the teeth version

>>641597
i didnt upsate my da in years
for crits, this anon >>641651 gave you a mixed bag
elbows dont stick out too much, i knwo girls that are all elbows and knees, but what is wrong is that you forearm bone just below it is not twisted with the muscles overreleing it its seems like it curves up
your spine does lack curvature, but its more your scapulas not sticking out properly
for abs. its mostly about body fat not musculuture, yours are in fact too small, you are modeling an active person, but you get that deep middle line only when sticking your chest out, so push it a tiny bit up
as for lower spine i dont ever see it flat, thats the problem of using 3d models for refs, other artists are usually shit when it comes to anatomy, why i only use real life refs
that region changes too much based on butt size, bdy fat level and posture

i can do some pic refs, but in 2 days when im back home

you got some other serious mistakes, mostly shoulders m neck, scapula back od your legs and your lower leg shape