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>>502605
>>502606

Hey anon,
I would space out the eyes and scale them up, and fix the top of the "skull" (or it could be your hair that's messing up the form, as seen on the side view)
The hand is a bit of a problem, mainly due to the lack of the bump between the base of the palm and the wrist
Aside from that, I'd probably add more stylized and thicker eyelashes, and I recommend making the hair part by part (as I've draftly coloured to illustrate) instead of a whole mesh (unless you intend to bring it into a sculpting software and sculpt it, although part by part is actually more workable and "neat" in my opinion for sculpting)
Side view looks good, I think it's your front view proportions that's giving you trouble
Good job anon, work on it a little more and I'm sure it'll come out great