/3/ - 3DCG

>>357195
I'm pretty new to the whole 3d modelling thing and /3/ but I'm guessing red lines are acceptable? There are three things which I feel like you can improve upon to take your model to the next step. The first is the stance. His stance is too narrow. A man of that thickness, weight and strength would never have that narrow of a stance. It makes him look strange and unstable and kind of detracts from the overall look of the character. Secondly the curve of the spine. A person with that much belly (or chest) fat is a lot more likely to be slouching forwards rather than backwards, especially backwards at such an extreme angle. Thirdly, the feet. This in combination with the stance makes him look unstable. In short, the feet need to be less short (haha).

Anyways I hope this has been helpful or if I've deeply offended you or something kay thanks.