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not bad, but the tree's topology really ruins the low-poly as an artistic intent - the edges show that you struggled and breaks consistency with the rest of the picture

also the lighting is very flat considering you probably wanted to make the fire the main light source.. the fact that the moon and fire are equally bright doesn't help, they are conflicting. Make the fire primary and get shadows that make sense. You could even have some depth of field.

finally, the scale of the objects is a bit strange and your scene would favor of having its camera at a lower angle, like a person near the fire instead of some random height

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