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>>450142
>>450225
Pay much more careful attention to how the deltoid actually connects the shoulder to the trunk.
Smooth out your shapes and try looking at living people for reference, your current take at anatomy looks
kinda like a person without any particular shape to their body took on a shirt with a 'anatomy surface'.

You need to pay attention to how people look as a whole and make your anatomy look like it's made of actual muscles
suspended on a internal armature of bones. It's also very important to catch the slight curvature of the bones of the skeleton.
We're not made up of straight pipes underneath like a stick-figure so to speak.

Here's a edit of me trying to make this guy look a bit more natural for reference.
Notice how all the limbs the trunk and the wrists are ever so slightly curved, giving it a more dynamic vibe.