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>>683684
I'd close the eyes a bit more, that'd likely go a long way to solving the "weird eyes" issue.

Anyway, it's obviously a competent piece of 3D work, well done on that front. In terms of it actually being a boss, I just don't know. I don't feel threatened by it, it doesn't look that imposing. Your mood board reflects that: you picked images of characters like Ada Wong and Lara Croft and Ruby Rose, and a bunch of seemingly normal, attractive ladies. As a result, you've created a seemingly normal, attractive cyberpunk lady. Ruby ends up looking more threatening since her color scheme has highlights of red in it whereas your model has a cyan tone instead.

I'm not telling you to change the design now because that's obviously weeks of work you'd have to re-do, just maybe take the advice for the next model you make: look at pictures of not just what you want the concept to largely look like, but also the type of thing it's trying to invoke. So for this one it'd be bosses and boss fights. In this case, look up images of Ruiner boss fights, Deus Ex boss fights, Syndicate boss fights, or whatever other boss fight you remember and like... not all of them are winners too frankly but there may be some that give you a bit of pause. Good luck!